tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4568570007804620306.post7046171706594012421..comments2023-05-17T02:15:42.024-07:00Comments on OldSchoolHaiku: Friday Poetically with Brian MillerOldSchoolHaikuhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09554467516627285351noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4568570007804620306.post-81694349772092090112011-01-15T17:57:05.866-07:002011-01-15T17:57:05.866-07:00A really nice rhythmic poem, one more dance great ...A really nice rhythmic poem, one more dance great ending to this lyrical poem,,, nicely done one shotjoannahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03338150531816845279noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4568570007804620306.post-8864116328371079242011-01-15T06:08:57.026-07:002011-01-15T06:08:57.026-07:00Good one! love the painted wooden horse,
and follo...Good one! love the painted wooden horse,<br />and following the wail- Thanks.izzyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06379007428464069723noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4568570007804620306.post-57471742616923147302011-01-14T13:00:32.273-07:002011-01-14T13:00:32.273-07:00yes, wonderful take on the prompt!
well done!
than...yes, wonderful take on the prompt!<br />well done!<br />thank youHopehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07423174840229628807noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4568570007804620306.post-34760120104626109422011-01-14T10:37:07.175-07:002011-01-14T10:37:07.175-07:00excellent play off the prompt, paying homage but t...excellent play off the prompt, paying homage but telling your own story....Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4568570007804620306.post-70953702575454887022011-01-14T09:38:22.389-07:002011-01-14T09:38:22.389-07:00From the back of a
Painted wooden horse
I follow....From the back of a <br />Painted wooden horse<br />I follow...what a unique picture...riding towards rhythmic beats..forlorn wail..niceClaudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4568570007804620306.post-41500787806891699802011-01-14T08:27:53.620-07:002011-01-14T08:27:53.620-07:00"Satriani's forlorn wail / A glimpse of L..."Satriani's forlorn wail / A glimpse of Lace..." Way to pay homage to the guitarist through a fine poem. Cheersdustushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07796500077556153584noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4568570007804620306.post-8117640350105470962011-01-14T07:32:55.903-07:002011-01-14T07:32:55.903-07:00Something about this had the ring of a neruda poem...Something about this had the ring of a neruda poem...brava sir ;)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com