Monday, January 10, 2011

Haiku – The essence of a poetic moment

Summer memories 
Knotted tree swing
No hibernation
Wintered shipwreck
Waiting restoration
Vanished hope
Withered knowledge
Tree whispers
Lesson to river

11 comments:

lizziviggi said...

All beautiful, but I love the last one!

Mama Zen said...

I love that last one!

repressedsoul said...

Intelligent writing emphasised by beautiful art. Thank you ever so much for sharing

moondustwriter said...

They are all excellent and much more in a classic style
I think getting the classical feel where you are part of nature is a challenge

these were beautiful

Beachanny said...

Loved them all especially tree whispers lesson to river! Well done Gay @beachanny

Natasha said...

What a wonderful journey you have presented. Form and photos are both beautiful and compelling. Thanks to Onestop for the introduction!

Jingle Poetry said...

lovely nature images,
your words are perfect.

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Shewriting said...

lovely poetry and your photography is amazing!

Shashi said...

All of the Haiku were beautiful and the images complemented it all so well. That last one was perfect with passing of message of life and living...

beautiful.

Shashi
ॐ नमः शिवाय
Om Namah Shivaya
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Twitter @VerseEveryDay

Suz said...

#3 you nailed it