Sunday, January 23, 2011

Ybor City Kushu

Sauvignon Blanc
Complement spring menu
Pale straw palate

Arturo Fuente’s,
Cooled smoked raising,
Saloon’s ceiling

Wintered admirer,
Gazes toward Summer,
Youth’s optimism

Unfocused turquoise,
With frozen stare,
Spews jealousy 


dustus said...

Well done progression of succint stanzas with excellent details. Thanks for a great challenge response!

Anonymous said...

Clean Bill, loved your take on this especially the winter and Summer. Is he jealous or just inanely smug lol I don't know. Great stuff x

Fireblossom said...

Ha! I didn't even notice Ms. Turquoise. (and that's why she's so filled with spite and hatred. A woman after my own stony lil heart!)

Reflections said...

Hadn't even noticed the Turquoise lady... filled with detail, distinct steps through time... til at last, smug victories.

Jerry said...

Good catch on the unfocused torquise. Nice.

Theodore Daniel Richards said...

It takes the discerning eye of an old schooler to notice Miss Turquoise.

jen revved said...

it's in the details, isn't it? I really like this a lot. great job. xxxj

hpicasso said...

just what is Ms. T up to...focus, focus...nice take

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Zouxzoux said...

Beautifully written.