Sauvignon Blanc
Complement spring menu
Pale straw palate
Complement spring menu
Pale straw palate
Arturo Fuente’s,
Cooled smoked raising,
Saloon’s ceiling
Cooled smoked raising,
Saloon’s ceiling
Wintered admirer,
Gazes toward Summer,
Youth’s optimism
Gazes toward Summer,
Youth’s optimism
Unfocused turquoise,
With frozen stare,
Spews jealousy
9 comments:
Well done progression of succint stanzas with excellent details. Thanks for a great challenge response!
Clean Bill, loved your take on this especially the winter and Summer. Is he jealous or just inanely smug lol I don't know. Great stuff x
Ha! I didn't even notice Ms. Turquoise. (and that's why she's so filled with spite and hatred. A woman after my own stony lil heart!)
Hadn't even noticed the Turquoise lady... filled with detail, distinct steps through time... til at last, smug victories.
Good catch on the unfocused torquise. Nice.
It takes the discerning eye of an old schooler to notice Miss Turquoise.
it's in the details, isn't it? I really like this a lot. great job. xxxj
just what is Ms. T up to...focus, focus...nice take
if you care to:
http://hpicasso.blogspot.com/2011/01/sense-of-humor.html#comments
Beautifully written.
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