Shaking doubts
Fog of uncertainties
Kicking away
Mindless suspicions
Fog of uncertainties
Kicking away
Mindless suspicions
From the back of a
Painted wooden horse
I follow
Satriani's forlorn wail
A glimpse of Lace
One small look
Please
Please
One More Dance
One More Dance
7 comments:
Something about this had the ring of a neruda poem...brava sir ;)
"Satriani's forlorn wail / A glimpse of Lace..." Way to pay homage to the guitarist through a fine poem. Cheers
From the back of a
Painted wooden horse
I follow...what a unique picture...riding towards rhythmic beats..forlorn wail..nice
excellent play off the prompt, paying homage but telling your own story....
yes, wonderful take on the prompt!
well done!
thank you
Good one! love the painted wooden horse,
and following the wail- Thanks.
A really nice rhythmic poem, one more dance great ending to this lyrical poem,,, nicely done one shot
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